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1 Come in... read the story... taj Čet Dec 10, 2009 5:51 am

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Ko voli priče, ovde ću postavljati pa neka čita...
Ovo bi bila priča nastala u roku od 10-ak minuta pošto je tako rekla nastavnica... Na temu dvoje u pustinji...
Ja sam je krstio:


~ The precious liquid

It was supposed to be the light, a happiest memory of my life, but
rising darkness went to the wings of the steel wings of the beast and
doomed us all. If I knew that would happen, I am sure I would not go to
the meeting in Egypt. When the airplane crushed and was covered by warm
sand of the desert and hot sun beams that were melting during each
second. I was sure we are dying, as we are during each second from our
birth. There were only two people, and only one bottle of water, me and
Angela, two lucky ones that survived the crash, neither can live while
the other survives, it was obvious. Our situation was not the one you
should dream of, certainly it was the one when we needed more luck than
usually. I was a gentleman, I gave her the water, the precious liquid
we need to live, she looked like she needed her more than I do. My body
was weak, like a worm that had to linger through hell. The hell was the
sun, source of all life, not death, which will in this case be. We were
walking for three days, nothing. No water, no people, no life... Then
we heard the warm sound of same steel beast that brought us to the same
ordeal. It was our lucky beast... It just has to look down and spot us
first.

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2 Re: Come in... read the story... taj Pet Dec 11, 2009 12:18 pm

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Moram da updateujem temu.. pošto nema komentara...

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3 Re: Come in... read the story... taj Sub Dec 12, 2009 1:59 pm

Super je

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4 Re: Come in... read the story... taj Sub Dec 12, 2009 3:05 pm

*Mare-SBK™*

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Swidja mi se prica xDD

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5 Re: Come in... read the story... taj Sub Dec 12, 2009 4:11 pm

Sviđa mi se uvodni deo u priču, mogao si malo da je proširiš u ta tri dana bez vode, da uneseš neka dešavanja.
Inače je lepa ideja i priča (:

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6 Re: Come in... read the story... taj Ned Dec 13, 2009 11:28 am

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Hvala... pisao sam je 10 minuta. -_-

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7 Re: Come in... read the story... taj Čet Dec 31, 2009 3:41 am

Đa mi se :D

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8 Re: Come in... read the story... taj Sub Jan 02, 2010 6:17 am

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Lepa je prica. xD :D

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9 Re: Come in... read the story... taj Ned Jan 03, 2010 10:44 am

Super priča :)

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10 Re: Come in... read the story... taj Sub Jan 30, 2010 11:56 am

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extra prica...<3


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11 Re: Come in... read the story... taj Pon Dec 27, 2010 3:16 am

pre dobrooo je

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12 Re: Come in... read the story... taj Uto Jan 04, 2011 8:30 am

Uzivala sam

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